Pokemon: Starting from the different color Lalulas

As usual, after writing a volume, write a reflection.

This is the end of the Melting Moon chapter.

Thank you all book friends for your support.

Many thanks.

Overall, this volume is a real pity. In my opinion, it is only slightly better than the Silver Wind Chapter... but not as good as the Cuixue Chapter and the Canghua Chapter. .

You can also see that this volume has been filling in the previous pits, and has been finishing the book, trying to draw the 'circle' that was established from the beginning as softly as possible.

According to my opinion, this volume is the final chapter, and Xu Qiansu's story will completely end when Rong Yue climbs out of the wall.

But I had no choice but to do something like this, which forced me to change my mind and try my best to make this story longer.

Originally, the two plots in Caolu Town and Shuizhou Town were supposed to be about Miss Mali and Miss Dale... Later, they were cut off in a hurry, and the Spring Festival, sports meeting, and gym battle were added in an anticlimactic way. ...As a result, there were big problems with the pacing and plot arrangement.

well.

What a pity...what a pity.

But...well...there are fewer and fewer book friends who are still following me, and now there are only about a hundred people left.

Um...has the plot collapsed to this extent?

It seems that the vast majority of book lovers do not actually want to read the stories of Xu Qiansu, Cattleya, Rong Yue and others, but simply want to read Pokémon.

However, the goal of this book from the beginning was to write about Xu Qiansu's daily life in the Pokémon world, rather than to one-sidedly cultivate Pokémon, then fight passers-by, villains, gyms, and finally mythical beasts... In this case, it can't just be Write Pokémon, otherwise, Xu Qiansu and the other characters will not have much depth and room for growth.

And this volume is the most important plot that deepens Xu Qiansu's image, so the proportion of Pokémon stories is indeed smaller than before.

It would be nice if my writing skills could be better and tie Pokémon into these stories more closely.

It's my lack of ability.

But the matter has come to this, and I am determined to continue writing like this. Even if some book friends abandon the book, I will still bring Xu Qiansu, Cattleya, Mari, Gardevoir, Kyuubi and other characters to life and make them vivid and flesh-and-blood. Live in the Pokémon world instead of using it as a tool. You won't be able to leave any impression after reading it.

Someone here is going to say, "You don't think that if you write like this, you can write deeply, right? Giving out knives in the Pokémon world is just a bunch of excuses and ruins childhood. My evaluation is that it is not as good as Teacher Lu A hair."

I said, I can fuck you.

I don’t know why, but recently there are always people coming here to comment, saying that this is not as good as Teacher Lu, and that is not as good as Teacher Lu. When I look at the title, oh, trainee, either I came from a pirated version, or I only read the Cuixue chapter... Actually Our circle of Pokémon authors is so large, and we all live in harmony with each other...it's common to recommend each other's books and chat with each other.

And although I don’t know Mr. Beichuan, I also know that my level is limited and my writing skills are third-rate, but aren’t you guys just trying to trick him?

Like a fanatic.

That's too far.

Let’s talk about this book.

The emotions in this volume are more straightforward than those in the previous three volumes... Because if I don’t write to this level, many book friends really won’t be able to understand it (I helplessly spread my hands), but there are still many cryptic places. .

For example, at the beginning of the book, Xu Qiansu often said, "Become a great person," but now he no longer says that... I would like to point this out using Miss Dale's words.

For another example, just a few chapters into this volume, I started traveling with Lillie... This Lillie knew everything, so looking back now, I can see many small details about her.

And Xu Qiansu's love for Rong Yue... I have never written how Xu Qiansu fell in love with Rong Yue, let alone let Rang cry because of Rong Yue... I think the atmosphere of the chapter "Traveler" is enough , and after Rong Yue died, Xu Qiansu also wandered around in confusion for a week.

I still prefer to use the actions of these characters to express emotions.

In addition, Cattleya agreed to Xu Qiansu being with Lillie and Miss Mary.

There is actually nothing to say. Cattleya even became incoherent and began to yell, which was enough to see her inner struggle... So that chapter basically expressed her feelings directly, but this is an important turning point, so it is better to mention it.

Because of Rong Yue, Xu Qiansu transformed into a scumbag and took that step completely.

Cattleya made a compromise because of Xu Qiansu.

Essentially, it was because Xu Qiansu loved Rongyue and Cattleya loved Xu Qiansu.

If it weren't for Rong Yue, Lillie and Del alone would not have been able to turn Xu Qiansu into a scumbag. However, Rong Yue was brave and enthusiastic, took the initiative to pursue Xu Qiansu, and took the first step, and Xu Qiansu finally made a change.

Of course, given Miss Ma Li's status in Xu Qiansu's heart, it's okay... But Miss Ma Li won't be as proactive and enthusiastic as Rong Yue, nor does she have Rong Yue's sense of urgency that 'she is about to die, so she must leave no regrets' , so this role that changed Xu Qiansu fell on Rong Yue, his first love.

Cattleya agreed because Xu Qiansu's departure made her completely scared and at the same time she felt so distressed that she couldn't help herself.

With Cattleya's character, it was impossible for Cattleya to hold Xu Qiansu in her arms and comfort him softly after he returned from wandering... She would only use this method to care and love Xu Qiansu... even if she had to compromise on her own.

Of course she didn't want Xu Qiansu to be with other women, but as she said herself.

"There's nothing she can do about it. She loves Xu Qiansu hopelessly. As long as it can make him happy, Cattleya is willing to do anything."

This is how Cattleya dares to love and hate, and is decisive and strong.

And what about Xu Qiansu? There is no need to mention his playfulness, responsibility, or intelligence. These are just part of his character image. What I focus on in this volume... is actually his strength and gentleness.

Just like he was confused because of Rong Yue's death and wandered for a week without even noticing that Vulpix was following him, but he instinctively bought bread for Vulpix, but after a week, he suddenly woke up without experiencing anything. 'Come here.

He was also confused and struggling, and was not omnipotent. However, he did not want to show his vulnerability to others. After suddenly 'awakening', even though he was still immersed in the grief after Rong Yue's death, he had to comfort Naoko and let her accompany her family. , to comfort Lillie and let her be herself and not have to live in the shadow of Rong Yue.

He gains and loses at the same time, but he is essentially a strong and gentle person.

This kind of character is actually ordinary. After all, most of the standard male protagonists in online novels are like this...that is, Asasi.

However, according to my habits, I am basically unwilling to write about Xu Qiansu's psychological activities, but I want to use these plots to highlight... I personally think that writing this way can make the character more vivid.

Of course, most book friends have not noticed this, so I can only mention it here.

Someone here is going to say, "Aren't you strong and gentle? Isn't it just about writing about the harem? Is it about you? There are many female protagonists! Harem stories will always get bad reviews!"

I said, don’t read the plot, just attack the subject without thinking. Have you counted 13? Oh, no, none of you have 13. How could you have 13?

Okay, that’s about it for this volume.

Next, I will answer some questions accumulated by book friends.

1: The plot is like "Norwegian Wood".

That's right, Kobayashi Xia Mori's "Kobayashi", and "Naoko", and even sang "Norwegian Wood" on the bus. I have paid tribute with it written on my face. Of course, you can say that I am a weird stitcher and plagiarized. I recognize them all.

In order to improve my writing skills, I recently read "Norwegian Wood" and "Snow Country", and I am currently watching "Izu No Dancing Girl", so there are references to these works in the article. (I still like "Norwegian Wood" the most and have watched it several times.)

2: It’s been a bit tricky since the Canghua chapter... Why does it start to look more and more like a literary work?

This makes me a little unbearable. This book has not reached that point yet, but because I am reading the works above, it has a hint of literary works... In fact, the essence is still a literary youth disease.

3: The emotional drama is only slightly better than Xiao Baiwen’s emotional drama. It’s really rubbish. You’d better read the emotional drama in “The Warlock’s Handbook” and learn from it!

Um... I don't understand... I should at least point out where I write rubbish. If there are book friends who have read "Warlock's Handbook", please give me some advice.

4: Are there any extras?

There should be no more. After all, I wanted to get into the top 450 monthly votes before writing, but with the current results...well, it's impossible.

But after it is finished, I might write a little bit... Of course, you can only read it if you have a full subscription. I still hope that book friends who are reading pirated copies can come and support the original version. After all, the author also has to eat.

5: Always traveling through time, the timeline is too messy!

Regarding time travel, I should write more plainly and understandably... But in fact, I only travel twice in the Canghua chapter and the Rongyue chapter, and there are only these two times in this book. After all, I have basically completed the plot, 'Yuan' 'Already painted.

6: When will it be completed?

The next volume will be the final volume... maybe about half a million words?

7: What is the subject of the next book?

I haven't decided yet, but the next book will be original, and with my third-rate writing skills, it's normal to be offended, so I'm thinking about setting up a small account to write about martial arts and immortals (I'm a fan of martial arts and immortals) ...After all, the people who read this book are basically the audience for the beast-control novels and Pokémon novels, but I have never read the beast-control novels at all, am not interested in the beast-control novels, and have no idea how to write them.

It's fine if I'm young, but the current love writing situation is in decline, and I'm not confident that I can write a good result.

Quite distressing.

8: The gym battle is pretty well written, so will you write about the league competition next?

You may or may not write it.

For me, writing about battles is really not interesting. I can write it casually without considering the plot. In addition, the focus of this book is not on battles, so I always think that writing about battles is a bit superficial (because every time I Writing about battles is actually about relaxing your mind and being lazy)

But there are also quite a few book friends who really like the battles I wrote and are looking forward to it.

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So cast your vote, just like last time, the decision will be based on the number of comments a week later (if you write about the league competition, there will be more space for the battle, if you don’t write it, there will be less space, but it’s still there.)

Below are two options.

Write.

Do not write.

…

Well, no more.

These are the only questions I can answer.

Thank you to the boss of ‘Yueye Youquan’ for the 10,000 rewards, thank you very much!

I basically update about 6,000 words every day, so tomorrow I will update 8,000 words, two chapters, and 4,000 words in one chapter for additional updates.

This is the 10,000 reward from No. 9. I didn’t see it until now. I’m extremely sorry.

Above, thank you again to the 100 book friends who are still chasing this book.

This is the end of the Rong Yue chapter, the next volume... the final chapter, Blue Blood Heart.